Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Regarding wheather migrating to a new place is a good idea, the answer can vary considerably from individual to individual. Some people argue that it is certainly an unwise plan because of the risk of losing the old friends, while others consider trying to live in a brand new place is worth-trying. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former statement that migrating to a new place makes me depressed in most situation, and I will explain why I stand this viewpoint.
To begin with, making new friends often makes me stressful. It is not to say that I have social anxiety, but interacting with other people, especially strangers and acquaints, really exhausts me. For example, when I entered a new class in college, I had to manage my behavior properly in order to maintain a nice impression, such as pretend myself a kind and nice person. Futhermore, I realized my classmate little, so depression lingered around me when communicating to them in class, being afraid of offending someone unconsciously. I believe I will encounter the similar situation with a harsher condition if I move to others place. In other words, making new friends in new place put me into struggle.
In a addition, it will be pity that lose the connection of old friends. Building a relationship costs a lot of time. In the meanwhile, relationship need to be sustained, or it will vanish sooner or later. For instance, I moved from country to city to enter the college. Even though I attempted to contact the friends in my hometown frequently initially, the long distance alienates us eventually. Currently, We meet once or twice a year, owing to the far distance. Sometimes, I miss the old day that we are used to being good friends.
Lastly, when you struggle, old friends are more willing to lend a land. The news friends from new place are more likely to reject, for you are not familiar with each other enough. Just think you are more willing to help a ten-year friend, or a foreign guy who moved here recently, not to mention that it is difficult to make friend in a place with different culture. In this case, people will be forced to handle all the things by themselves. To avoid the helpless situation, I definitely reject to reside in new place without an acceptable reason.
In a nutshell, I firmly believe that migrating to other place is not a good idea, owing to the risks of losing the old friends. It is because to avoid the depression I will get from making new friends and to cherish the old relationship. Also, I do not want to trapped into a helpless situation when struggling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'someones'.
Suggestion: someones
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, really, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68640350877 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81504386341 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1473728916 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0416666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247508830864 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686952253654 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433866460928 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139356680681 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292694473506 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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