Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large it is established beyond doubt that with the dawn of human civilization, people have adapted to contemporary lifestyle. In this regard, to stay happy, a comfortable life is of paramount importance. There has been no shortage of debates among scholars whether the way of living of our ancestors was convenient or today's lifestyle is struggle free. As for writer's opinion, I subscribe to the notion by agreeing that in this modern world, people are living more comfortably now. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my stance is that technology has eased our tasks. It is notable that in this faced-pace life, people do not want to waste their time in doing home chores. Thanks to the modern technology, they have plenty of machines which have taken over labor. However, in the past, people used to do all tasks with their hand which consumed a lot of time. Vividly, they did not had sufficient time to relax or take care of themselves which made their life hard. With a case in mind, last weekend I asked my grandmother how people in the past used to find time for themselves. She told me that they did not have dishwasher, laundry machines, kitchen and cleaning appliances which made their life so difficult that they barely found time for themselves. She along with her sisters used to work all day long just to clean the house and cook a meal. That made me really sad and I realized the importance of a comfortable life I am having today. This clearly manifests my idea.
The second exquisite rationale behind my thought is rooted in the fact that with the advancement in the medical field, people do not suffer much as compared to the past. It is crystal clear that nowadays, with the establishment of science, there are treatments available to cure diseases and to relieve symptoms in case of any illness. Whereas, in the past, our grandparents suffered and they had to tolerate pain when they were sick. This made their life strenuously tough. Moreover, the death rate were very high in the past due to lack of cure available which causes a depression and gloominess in societies. By way of illustration, 2 year ago, I had a Tuberculosis which is a deadly diseases but I cured after a year just because of antibiotics prescribes by my doctor. Had I lived in past, I would not be able to survive since there were no antibiotics at that time. Therefore, the life today is more easy.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer although in the ancient era, living was comparatively simple, with the advancement in science, people are living a stress free life nowadays. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating; first, technological advancement has aided people in many ways, secondly, treatment is available for various diseases. As for the writer's advice, I vehemently urge people to gratitude the kind of life they have now and by doing so, they will realize the importance of the facilities around them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to free'
Suggestion: to free
...venient or todays lifestyle is struggle free As for writers opinion I subscribe to t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...umed a lot of time Vividly they did not had sufficient time to relax or take care o...
^^^
Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
... I had a Tuberculosis which is a deadly diseases but I cured after a year just because o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...ailable for various diseases As for the writers advice I vehemently urge people to grat...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as for, kind of, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68311195446 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6661847385 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49715370019 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 527.0 20.1344086022 2617% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2468.0 100.406767564 2458% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 527.0 20.6045352989 2558% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 114.0 5.45110844103 2091% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133228281436 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133228281436 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867994256865 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308597648136 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 264.1 11.7677419355 2244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -454.97 58.1214874552 -783% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 207.6 10.1575268817 2044% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 33.04 8.01818996416 412% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 212.8 10.0537634409 2117% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.247311828 576% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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