Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
As we all know, job is an external topic for people’s life. Nearly all people who have graduated strive to deliver the resume, consider the work environment, and work for making a living. Therefore, when it comes to the issue that what is the most important aspect of a job, some people contend that the answer is the money a person earns. However, as for me, I cannot subscribe to this idea.
Admittedly, earning money is an essential part of work. Whenever you tend to apply for a job, you must take the salary as your consideration, because whether you could bring home the bacon depends on whether you money earned from your job is enough to support your necessity for making a living and livelihood plays an essential role of life, after all, all of us cannot live without eating. However, almost the salary of all work could meet your demand for living, if you are not extravagant and luxurious. Hence, there must be some other aspects of job we need to attach more importance to.
Initially, promotion route is more important than the money earned by a person. Keep in mind that we have already mentioned that we could not only be with a view to making a live; as a matter of fact, as long as we work, it’s easy for us to ensure our basic living needs. Therefore how to get improvement and maximize our value is more important for us, when every work could satisfy our basic living demand. For example, I can remember that when I was an undergraduate, my adviser told me that the promotion route, in other other words, whether you have the higher position of job you could obtain. After all, lower salary is not a problem and what is really scary is that you will be constant to have a low salary and the same position, which leads you to meet the same people or same class. And then, what will happen? As a Chinese saying goes, if you live with a lame person you will learn to limp. As the same way, you may be in the same class and make the friends with people who are in the same lower class. Without more excellent people, you may be in a vicious circle without learning advanced knowledge.
On top of that, it is work site that is also of more importance than the salary people earn. Work site includes the distance and transportation from the company you work for to your home. Just imagine, a short distance could save your time and energy. You may not get up too early and simultaneously spend less time on the road. On the other hand, that the transportation is convenient will save your money or even reduce the possibility of being annoy because the fee of subway or bus is much more different than the fee of taxi and you are more likely to be upset if it has a bad traffic condition. Therefore, even if you have a high salary, you may be hard to stick to the work if the work site is not suitable for you.
Based on the discussion and debate above, we can draw the conclusion that promotion route and the work site are more important than the money earned by people, not only because promotion route determine if you could get a high salary and meet more excellent people who can help and influence you, but also work site decides the stability of the work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, after all, as for, for example, as a matter of fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2599.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 589.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41256366723 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35940070479 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431239388795 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 836.1 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 15.0 3.51792114695 426% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.7689862393 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.291666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5416666667 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29166666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202603113978 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695221385262 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595088306789 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129302909101 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443510130895 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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