It has to be acknowledged that prior to the inception of computer and online programs, movies and television are considered as one of the predominant source of entertainments. Still now, people including young adult enjoy movie watching or programs telecast on tv. Some people thinks that movie and television are responsible for deterioration of young generation and their moral degradation while others posses the opposite view. Personally, I disagree with the statement and I take this point on account of following reasons.
First of all, Movies are not created only for the purpose of entertainment, rather the story of movies have plethora of purposes. Some movies are based on technology while some are based on mystry, suspense, crime or biography based. There are lot of movies which are inspirational and encourages us to never give up and reminds us how much creative human beings are. For example, a movie named "Shawshank Redemption" is really a worth watching movie in which very nicely it is presented that it is the hope through which a man can find way to live, to dream, to start life in a new way even if everything of a person is messed up. The movie review shows that how much inspirational this movie was for the young generation. The movie based on real stories not only inspire us but also provoke our thinking ability about the struggle of a person to be successful. Movies based on science fiction or technology teaches us how technology can smooth the life or solves the problems which initially seems to be tough to perform. So, in no way one can say that the movies have more negative effects on the behavior of young generation though some movies shows extreme level violence or nudities.
Secondly, television plays an important role to raise awareness among the people about the consequences of positive or negative activities. So many programs telecast on tv like BBC tedtalk, hard talk, programs telcast on discovery or National geography channels has educational value. From these programs, young generation can be able to find out interest or information about many things that was not known to them previously. Series telecast on tv are still popular among young genrations not only for entertainment, but also for their storylines. For instance, FRIENDS is tv series which still make people emotional about the significance of friendship, bonding.
In a nutshell, movie and television have more positive role on the mental and phylosophical instincts among young generations comared to negative effects on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...e predominant source of entertainments. Still now, people including young adult enjoy...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a new way" with adverb for "new"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd way to live, to dream, to start life in a new way even if everything of a person is messe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12142857143 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93409370943 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519047619048 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2438173444 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218816965374 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746215799961 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683628236365 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160347190181 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703309038818 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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