Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples t

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

All over the world, there has been an overwhelming wight of obsession on people`s mind regarding making decisions of young people. It`s a little hard to reach a consensus about this issue, however, in numerous circles of researchers and experts, whereas some are inclined toward the opinion that, in the past young people rely more on parents adevice for making a decision than now. On the other extreme of the rope, opponents believe that, today young people make their own lives by rely on themselves. While both sides have their own position, from my vantage point, the latter attitude carries more wight. In what follows, I will delve into some conspicuous aspects which persuade me to put forward this perspective.

To begin, the first point I`d like to make is that, in this modern era by developing technology and people`s knowledge, making decision become easier from the past. Let me illustrate that in other word. Today young people have an access to the internet and can surf the net easily., also they can find anythnig they want for making a good desicion. My own experience is a compelling example of what I mean. When I was 18 years old, I wanted to choose a good major for my future education, thus, I searched and read all features and properties of each major. I talked to someone online that graduated of industrial engeneering and he shared his experience with me, all these activities helped me to choose a major instead of my parent`s advice.

The second reason coming to my mind to substantiate and indicate my stand point concerning this issue is that, today young peole are more clever from the past. I believe it is result of envirnments, technologies and modern societies affect. For instance, my little brother played game with my camputer, work with my cellphone before he could walk and talk, it`s incredible. Base on what I mentioned, definetely in the future my brother and every children similar to him able to making decisions and their life easily.

Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exception which are axcluded from the general rule, I do agree that, today young peole are better able to rely on themselves in order to make a decision. To recapitulate the reasons, by developing technology and young people`s awareness they can make decisions without parent`s help, in addition, today young people are more clever from the past ones.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponents believe that, today young people make their own lives by rely on themselv...
^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... in other word. Today young people have an access to the internet and can surf the net ea...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, i mean, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99508599509 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72521338015 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542997542998 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5640159254 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.588235294 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334150203179 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105614645703 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084671466003 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219732588466 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687541989357 0.0645574589148 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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