Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
I agree that people are never pleased with what they have ; they either want something more or different. Nowadays it is easy for people to get bored about anything, the desire wanting all, it's almost in human nature .
First of all, people tend to consume more material things even when they don’t need it, taking in consideration how a person's brain works plus the environment that provokes the feeling of wanting something better that one already has. Which can be related with the things that one enjoys the most, seeking the possibility of a way for obtaining it, the desire of having more continues and never reaching the point of being satisfied. Some studies recognized it as impulsive consuming, at the same time, in my perspective is more about the moment, for instance in the case of cellphones it happens frequently, when a new phone is announced everyone wants it at the moment and the idea of having it stays there till is accomplish therefore it happens the same thing with anything .
Subsequently taking in consideration, people tend to not appreciate what they have, no matter what it is there can be a higher expectation of it, cause things are always changing for been better making people believe that what they have in this moment is useless and common mostly used as a technique at marketing, for example cars, technology even clothes are always offering better things and a small quantity of people can actually acquire it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91164658635 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58097324715 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.634889739 48.9658058833 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.833333333 100.406767564 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5 20.6045352989 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286400665968 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14541066059 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155373574924 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227548285042 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865913729626 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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