Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
It is natural that we tend to want something different in lives. Though some people disagree with the statement. I believe that people never feel satisfied with what they have and always want something more for three main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, people tend to find what they don’t have instead of looking what they have already possessed. For example, I bought a new smartphone last year and it was still good to use. However, I still want to buy a new one because there are many smartphones that are better than the one I have.
Secondly, people always forgot the old one when they get a new one. To be specific, I keep buying new clothes though I already have abundant of clothes in my closet. In fact, I only wear them a few times because I always wear new clothes and forgot the old ones.
Finally, new things tend to be more attractive to people. For instance, my brother had lots of Lego, but whenever the Lego company published a new collection, he will beg my mom to buy for him.
In conclusion, people will not satisfy with what they have because they tend to look for things that they do not have. They always forgot what they have bought after they bought new ones. In addition, new things are more attractive to us. That’s why we never feel satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to want something different in lives. Though some people disagree with the statement...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 238.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57983193277 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35101962354 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504201680672 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8766389517 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356981391289 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126441327732 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128841195786 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214298840114 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172917598019 0.0645574589148 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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