Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People always would like to do enjoyable things or jobs in their life in order to be satisfied but life is full of unexpected events. I believe that people should not always do things that they like doing, and sometimes they should learn and do other things which are unenjoyable for them for two main reasons which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, people can bump into some unwanted situations in their life, so they need to prepare for every difficult time and have to challenge themselves by learning and doing something different. For example, one of my friends is a compelling example of this. Ten years ago, after she graduated from college, she could not find a job for a while. She had worked as a tailor during that time instead of sitting at home without working. Because when she was in high school, her family sent her to a tailor every summer to gain some skills. She had not wanted to go the first time but she also did not want to upset her family. So that she learned how to make and mend clothes. If she had declined to learn to tailor, she would not have afforded her expense after collage.
Secondly, young people generally do not know which type of jobs fit them. They need to experience more than one thing in their life, then they can decide whether this job suits them. For instance, when I was in middle school, my parents wanted me to take a math class. I was thinking that I could not stand math class. However, after two or three months, I realized astonishingly that I am skillful for math, and I wanted to continue this class. I chose a math field in college and accomplished. If I had not taken a math class because of my unwillingness, I could not have succeeded in this area currently.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people sometimes should do things that they do not want to do. This is because people need to know how can they do some kind of things that can be required in their life. Moreover, they can notice that they can be successful in these things that can affect their career in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'would' and 'like'.
Suggestion: would always like
People always would like to do enjoyable things or jobs in their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45789473684 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38497722075 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489473684211 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.712812767 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252946119969 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811150364252 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133539633886 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194369266506 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137428242931 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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