Should a person never make an important decision alone? People express different opinion on this. From my perspective, I agree with that the important decision never make alone because of the couple of reasons.
First, the decision cannot be the proper decision when we make alone even we are the intelligent and skillful persons. The decision has the high probability of getting the mistake and becomes unsuccessful. For example, I am an engineer in a company. One day I decided to draw an apartment without consulting with my helper. As a result, I suffered from a problem, I wrongly constructed the space in the toilet in that apartment. When the supervisor said the mistake, I realized that the decision done by only one person may be an improper decision even we are intelligent and skillful.
Next, while making the decision from the group of people, we discuss to each other and the cooperation is another benefit among the people. For instance, my father always makes decision after the discussion with all family members and our family members cooperate with each other. They help any problem of any family members and our family is easy going. On another hand, my uncle always makes decision without consulting to the family members. To arguing, fighting is usual routines of my uncle’s family.
Finally, we get the skill and knowledge from the group decision. We listen all members’ opinions and after that, we gain the skill and knowledge of other’s people. For example, I did not have the experience of the business on transportation but I wanted to conduct the business. When I met friends, they gave the various suggestion. As a result, I became clear about the challenges of the transportation sector and learned the skills from the friends for that business.
In conclusion, a person should not make the decision alone because the decision may be improper, do not cooperate by other people and from the groups, we learn the skill and knowledge which are essential for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00595238095 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78133559004 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3426498935 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187559588306 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655654798058 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934998824753 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133383910599 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10186985056 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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