Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue of preventing computer games for children, some people are opposing the view and others may be in favor of it. In my opinion playing computer games is a waste of time. Parents should allow them for limited time only.There are so many reasons for supporting this idea.
Firstly, Technology has been changed drastically, it has many advantages and disadvantages.
Nowadays most parents have one child and they are busy with their office work, house work, study, etc. So most of the parents don't have time to spend with their children.After office hours parents might be busy with business meeting or other business.Children have adolescent mind set like parents they also attract towards computer.But They won't be able to understand, that parents are using technology for their work, children will play computer games.Most of children are playing a game using online method.Because they knew about their friends, and form a team to defend imaginary enemies.In a game there are a lot of task to do by a player, time consuming process.They will never understand the advantages of outdoor games such as swimming, football, baseball, etc.Outdoor games helps children to keep up physical health, team work, communication, positive thoughts. However Computer games lead to negative thoughts like defending enemies, bomb blasts, gunshots, and destroying the city.
Another reason I would like to explain is that computer games cause many health problems such as eye irritation, headache, and hand pain. Nowadays, the biggest problem in the world is child obesity.The main reason behind that is sitting for hours and eating junk food to play computer games.
In conclusion parents should restrict the time period, set rules for playing time and team, they can check the computer game which does not have any negative effects like killing another person, suicide, jump from balcony.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing computer games is a waste of time Children should not be allowed to play them Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing computer games is a waste of time Children should not be allowed to play them Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24590163934 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74557619799 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.625302024 48.9658058833 404% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.0 100.406767564 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285034355172 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115246486393 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837127801973 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144406310682 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919341976688 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.