Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of human’s modern society and galloping rate of science and technology, more and more children are getting attracted to computer Games. Some people might be of the opinion that children should be allowed to play computer games. Others think that playing computer games is waste of time and children should not be allowed o play them. I, personally believe that children should focus on some more productive work instead of playing games on computer. I hold this opinion for three main reasons which I will explain in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, Computer games played for fun leads to many serious health issues in near future. For instance, a child sitting on couch and playing computer games all day will be unhealthy as compared to the one going out and playing physical games such as football tennis, volleyball. Many researches have proved that passive activities lead to obesity. Which in turn lead to other health problems such as diabetes, poor eye sight, heart problems. So, children should be involved in activities, which provokes them to do some physical movements.
Second point to focus upon is that, just by staying at home and playing games, a child cutoff himself from the real world, that is society. He will not be able to learn the societal manners and interact with people. This will lead to introvert behaviour. Computer games take away our ability to think , children get so involved in playing games that they donot see what is going around them. Therefore, it is vital to refrain them from using computer for playing games.
Lastly, Computer games leads to addiction which inturn affects the academics of children. Children would not be able to perform better in their school. Just for example, as a child I use to play video games so desperately that I use to forget about my homework and other school stuff, that was my first priority as a student and my mother used to upbraid me badly.
In conclusion, from the above mentioned reasons and examples, I would firmly hold opinion to not to allow children to play computer games. As it leads to serious health issues and may lead to addiction if not taken care of at right time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86089238845 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43236967733 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1419301798 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366536318383 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121563480913 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112878131039 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212687866926 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756701534517 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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