Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that seeking for an appropriate profession is one the most significant matters that every individual do in his or her entire life. In order to find and select the best one you have to do your best and not only study hard in school, but also establish rapport with people is crucial. In my own perspective, I concur with the statement and I have numerous reason why I subscribe this particular attitude elaborating cogently in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, one should take into account this important fact that in the contemporary era the more various relations you have, the more chance you get to find a suited career. Some people might disagree with this idea and believe that the school resume is much more important, but if you ask me I definitely refuse their claim based on some studies that I have read recently. In this distinct survey, the sociologists investigate the high level managers of famous companies and asked them how many individual did you know before you get this job, and then compare their answers to the regular employee who work for the same firm. The results were surprising, the managers knew more that twice people in comparison to the regular employee. This brings up the idea that the more you know people the more chance you have to get a great job.
In approaching this issue, apart from the fact I have mentioned above, one should consider another subtle point meticulously that the ability to communicate with people is other vital factor in achieving a good job. Let's consider an example to illustrate my reason. One of my friend recently graduated from MIT university with great score and phenomenal resume, but he has this characteristic timidity. He doesn't know so much people and he is sort of isolated person. Hence after more than a year of his graduation he couldn't still find an appropriate career. All he get is only one job interview with low salary. On the other hand, one of my other friend who has a really sociable characteristic hired in a great company with high salary, only because she has some great relations with variety of famous persons.
Taking all aforementioned arguments into accounts leads us to the conclusion that establishing rapport is even more crucial than having a excellent resume in the school. The ability of communicating with different people, and having contact with vast circle of individuals is pivotal in order to get a high prestigious profession. In nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity of reasons supplementing my viewpoint, which could be alluded, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun individual seems to be countable; consider using: 'many individuals'.
Suggestion: many individuals
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, still, then, apart from, in fact, no doubt, sort of, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87024608501 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73312528527 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534675615213 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5792449493 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.944444444 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259960696064 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080016250472 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455915413154 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150865977973 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044327326947 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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