Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
I do agree with this statement. Many colleges and universities in the world are considering only the academic part and gradually ignoring the sports' phase. From a student point of view, both should be given equal importance. The count of professors and trainers for a classroom to that of a social activity will be 10:2 approximately. The management never takes the underlying loss in the society into concern.
The colleges have to promise proper education and guarantee good job opportunities to the students, that is achived mostly, but they fail to consider the interactive and interesting section, which is the sports and social activities. These are also much required in shaping a citizen for our environment. Through education, we come to know the definitions and implications of the subjects taught to us, but we lag in incorporating or using them to develop the society.
Lets take an example. A person who scores well in his english class will not have much experience to conduct a symposium or even a literature debating society within the campus. He will fail to dwell in sports. Not all the university managements are ready to sponsor financially for sports. At least thirty percent of the fund allocated has to be granted to sports and kits. if all the people think in this way, meaning studies can buy us all, we can never receive any medals in Olympics and the physical activity starting from exercising will be faded away.
In most of the cases, talented individuals lack the opportunity to make it to the next stage in their achievements because of money. For example, women from India won the gold medal in athletics by running with a torn shoe. Here, the blame is not on her family and relatives but on the academy which permitted her to attend the meet. In this scenario, the college authorities. The reason for making such comparison is people fail to guess the outcome if provided support. In the same case, if that girl is given proper shoes, she might have reached better timings may be a world record though.
Conclusively, every art must be respected added sport and education are internally arts. Nowadays, certain modern schools have a texture called physical education, equipped with professional trainers shaping the talent of young enthusiasts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99476439791 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80479760656 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615183246073 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6786798439 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7272727273 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147882464556 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039367049581 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560922203385 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748874271434 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600598023661 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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