In this modern era, it has become more sophisticated along with the technology as there is lot of competition among the students and there is less time for their leisure activities. Although, some may opposed the idea of young people having less time to help their communities. However, I personally support the idea and the reason will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, in this 21st century young people have become self centered as they are not willing to make any compromise with their agenda. It is mainly because of their tide schedule at school and after reaching home they have to do their homework and all. My own experience is a compelling example to what I mean. During my school day I usually want to do better than anyone else and moreover, I do not excuse my self to help community when I have to study and do better in life. And I had to do all my homework when I reach home without thinking of doing it for next day. Therefore, I do not have much time to lend help to community services.
In addition, unlike in the past, today's youth are facing tremendous pressure. As youth nowadays they are not able to resist hard days or hard time because they tend to feel they are being overwhelmed by the work. For instance, my little brother who is just in 9th grade. He usually make complain about having pack schedule and he tend to get pressurize when there is some homework or assignments. With this, young people need more rest after tackling all those problems. As a result, they are not able to help communities because if they happen to engage in that program, they will find it more tiring.
I'm conclusion, I agree with the idea that today's youth are not giving more time to help community because they have become self centered because of their tide schedule and due to huge amount of pressure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56060606061 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42231173119 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8361248685 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268493864399 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884720477986 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609336609895 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163542833266 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649813215613 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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