Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the saying goes,"Honesty is the best policy." I do agree that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Take myself as an example. A close friend of mine once asked me to an exhibition, and we made the appointment a month before the day, but one of my best friend just came back to Taiwan from abroad a few days before the exhibition. Thus, I planned to hang out with my best friend instead of going to the exhibition, and I briefly told my friend that I'm busy on that day so I couldn't have attended the exhibition. It have never come to me that I would run into my friend on the road near the exhibition hall with my best friend next to me, and I didn't seem to be busy at all. After I came back home that day, I've sent a bunch of messages to apologize to my friend. I felt so guilty for a really long period even though I didn't have tell lies, and all I did wrong was I didn't have told her the truth. She forgave me without hesitation, but I still could feel her upset inside.
It can be hurt in a relationship when you found yourself deceived by another. Whatever the other person to compensate you afterwards, it will be hard to fully trust him of her in the future, and a relationship might come to an end before it be developed to a long-term one.
In my opinion, what people pursue is love in a relationship, and people get hurt from lies in general. When you love someone, you should not hurt them. Thus, I truly agree that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Putting it at the top priority would definitely help build a firm relationship.
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Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: couldn't
...my friend that Im busy on that day so I couldnt have attended the exhibition. It have n...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...l with my best friend next to me, and I didnt seem to be busy at all. After I came ba...
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Suggestion: I've
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Suggestion: didn't
... for a really long period even though I didnt have tell lies, and all I did wrong was...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
...ly long period even though I didnt have tell lies, and all I did wrong was I didnt h...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ve tell lies, and all I did wrong was I didnt have told her the truth. She forgave me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, really, so, still, thus, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34853420195 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77001311505 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3876848904 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1595293202 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696356070806 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107618085497 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143997205859 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102698554521 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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