Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
The question is whether recognizing a secure job in the past was easier than today or not. Everyone with regard to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I am inclined to affirm that the dominant condition in the past was providing several factors that humans could make logical decisions in relation with their future. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that size of the world was smaller in compared with the current time. The societies had a chance to take advantage of the low percentage of population. It goes without saying that a sparse community can lead the level of competition to lesson; hence, more job opportunities will be available. In a comparison with now, the economic crises have been spread; therefore, spontaneously the number of jobs has also been reduced. Having high percentage of population with the competition among them, the chance of finding a secure career will dwindle.
The second reason for my argument lies in the reality that the overwhelming majority of people did not access to university. Not only were located the universities in far cities, but also their cost was expensive. Needless to say to when all humans are in an equal level educationally, they will be sure about fixing of their job position. In other word, nowadays, since the technology has been keeping marching forward; hence, companies require a wide range of knowledge and skills from employees. For having a career permanently, one should not forget that gaining more experiences can lead him walk toward prosperity otherwise a man with a single skill may supersede a talent person.
Moreover, there is a bit of different here. In the past, the condition of economic was stable and people could rather predict the future's circumstance; however, nowadays, the fluctuation of financial in the world does not allow living beings to be sure about their future career.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that since population of human beings was low and also they did not have enough opportunities to go the university or participate in different classes for acquiring more experiences; consequently, people did not need to compete with each other they could discern and obtain their secure job in the future simply.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, i feel, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05778894472 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75413676338 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7213038106 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.2 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5333333333 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170352677716 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534172126981 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452385163027 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939926732572 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473723720393 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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