Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past, it is quite common that children made decisions largely depending on the help from their parents. Their parents decide which universities they choose, which major is good for them, even strongly influence how they choose a spouse. However, this situation has changed nowadays. Based on the following reasons, I agree that young people are now more capable to make decisions about their own lives.
With fast technology development, societies and industries have changed at a much faster pace. That means knowledge learned from two years or three years ago may not be worked today. Therefore, parents who are more experienced and knowledgeable than their children will no longer have edge over them. Their roles as an instructor have fad away by the rapid change. Young people are forced to face a challenge with less help from parents and have to decide with their strength.
Fortunately, the emerging and development of Internet offer strong support to young people, which they could not enjoy in the past. The Internet provides various information necessary for decision making. For example, if you have to choose a summer school program offered by a wide range of universities, you no longer need to turn to your parents for help. Typing the name of a program in a search engine, you will find information just in one click, having access to answers to all your doubts. These convenient and easily accessible sources enable young people to acquire knowledge that was difficult to collect at their parent’s age.
Even if online information does little help to decision making, one can still opt for a training course, offered by professionals and experts, both online and offline. Different from the online information, usually fragmented, training course normally provides participants with a systematic solution so that they will have a panoramic view of a specific area, a solid and indispensable instruction for decision making. Last year, I was wondering if I should open a WeChat blog. I could find the answer only if I knew how difficult it was to maintain a blog and what skills were required. So I took a training class online. With the help of knowledge I learned from that class, I weighed the pros and cons and made a decision.
To sum up, with the help of rich information on the Internet and professional training courses, young people are more capable to choose their own lives than they were in the past.
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| 2020-01-29 | nusybah | 80 | view |
| 2020-01-16 | 3dra | 60 | view |
| 2020-01-10 | Opak Pulup | 70 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99755501222 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70573663803 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547677261614 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4978901755 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313424460057 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085861373835 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956580170282 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184132561495 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089229373192 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.