Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
We are living in an era of technology, where everything is changing very fast. If we look back twenty years back, we will see that a lot of things were considered imaginary, yet happened nowadays. The same is right if we considered the future. Some say that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today, and I totally agree with that. I will try to illustrate my notion In the next few words.
First, as technology is developing at an astonishing speed, we may have more developed transport machines than cars. In the last few years, we got a lot of new devices that changed our way of living, so it will not be strange if we have something like flying cars or very fast trains in the future.
Secondly, considering the persistent inclining in the world population, it might be hard to keep using individual transport machines in crowded cities. For instance, we might be obligated to use bigger transport machines like trains or trams more than what we use now. In other words, there might not be enough space in our streets for this spiking numbers of cars.
Finally, although there are some kinds of cars that do not work with fuel, these new kinds are still not able to replace fuel cars until now. In the next twenty years, there might be a problem finding enough fuel for our cars. So if we were not able to find another effective energy source for our cars, we would end using alternate transport machines that work with different sources of energy.
As a conclusion, the world we live in is changing really fast, and cars might be one of the things that we will miss in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51186440678 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38158211122 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515254237288 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9868398264 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0714285714 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210575113234 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857929177822 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110506683289 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1230381373 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595606864792 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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