do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
there's no doubt that nowadays technology plays a prevailing role in every individual's lives. no one can deny the influences of technology advancement on our daily lives. a controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether the technology is improving in 20 years so that we eliminate cars and use something else as a vital transportation system or not. some people are inclined about the opinion that technology advancement is not that fast so we can find a suitable replacement for cars in twenty years. some others may take the opposite viewpoint and believe that technology improve faster and faster everyday. however i believe in former statement. in the subsequent paragraphs, i will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
the most significant reason coming to mind at first is that since we use fuels for cars and it doesn't exhausted in thirty years, so it's not a crucial issue in this decade and nowadays scientists may not put their effort on this issue. today's world struggle with some other crucial issues that occur earlier than replacing cars, for instance, replacing fossil fuels, finding a treatment for cancer, and improving transportation system. maybe twenty years later, when the fossil fuels ended on planet earth, this issue engage scientists and they notice this issue.
another equally important point is that even when the fossil fuels end, it is proved that we can use solar energy as the reliable source of energy for cars. the noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by recently conducted survey shows that 37 percent of car factories invest in a solar cars and even have some key concepts. scientists make a huge improvement in saving solar energy and use them as a fuel in cars, so in twenty years and maybe after that cars with new features and characteristics are made and these cars are more friends with nature than the old one.
the last but not the least reason, nowadays governments are putting their efforts on reducing cars because of its environmental and pollution problems. they encouraging people to use public transportation systems, like bus. but as the population growth become faster and faster, it is hard to supply sufficient public transportation vehicles for population demand. so they conclude that instead of encouraging people to use public transportation, inspiring them to use environmental-friendly cars, cars have less pollution. the U.S. government use this method and they inspire their society to buy Tesla cars (electric cars) by giving special facilities to those buy Tesla cars.
to wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that twenty years is not enough to reduce number of cars used. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. all in all, this issue has many uncertainties, since future is unpredictable and shouldn't be neglected.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'for instance', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248106060606 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.155303030303 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0984848484848 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0643939393939 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0397727272727 0.0685040099705 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119318181818 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0473484848485 0.0351676179071 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95429042996 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0189393939394 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.00189393939394 0.00188951952338 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.0984848484848 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113636363636 0.0209618222197 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0094696969697 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2981.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 484.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15909090909 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371900826446 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245867768595 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188016528926 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144628099174 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95429042996 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535123966942 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 64.1653741942 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0476190476 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9019544067 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.952380952 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.54480286738 487% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.6343959071 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.59854014599 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264531511077 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11273233409 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0584987113682 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.506078560779 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130847450804 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949325491612 0.114077575197 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586751863625 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281665983087 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.030237190286 0.067059652881 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167880463692 0.210909579961 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443576199588 0.0618886996521 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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