Nowadays, it is customarily accepted by majority of scientist that the ability of leadership is not just determined inherently and all people can gain this ability and improve it by practice, Leadership is regarded as practical skill which everybody can improve and amplify this trait. important part of our lives. People who has good leadership skills can influence many people and help them to succeed in their career. I would explore some which are conspicuous for me in the following paragraph.
First and foremost, you can find a lot of people who were very shy and introvert in their childhood and they have become professional manager on of the example of this fact is my father he used to be very and shy he also couldn’t speak in front of four people and also he says when he was a kid he had has difficulties to even start friendship but after a while he forced himself to improve this ability he participated to a lot of group class and also he drawn himself into the discussion and this ability was gradually improved and now he is manager of one of the biggest company in my town. Therefore, if my father hadn’t forced himself to participate into specific classes he wouldn’t have been the manager of this company now.
Another significant point that should be taken to the consideration is that, majority of the school invest inordinate amount of their budget prepare some classes such as music band or group communication in the university in order to improve the children’s leadership because they think their future success would depend to this trait, this is way some programs in university is required for student to participate.
Another interesting point which deserves some word here is that we have access to a lot of reliable sources which can help everyone to become a successful leader. There are some relevant majors like leadership coaching at the university which every individual who is keen on leadership can seek and reach their dreams. One of my friend is a compelling example of this. When he entered the university, he followed the civil engineering. However, after four years, he decided to change his major entirely and apply to the leadership coaching major at the ASU University. Now after fifteen years, he becomes one of the remarkable leaders of Us in coaching the companies, and he is so accomplished in his field.
To make a long story short, taking all of the aforementioned ideas into consideration, in these days with all of this technology and facility we can create everything and also we can improve all trait such as leadership skill.
- TPO 48- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Some people think the media including newspapers, televisions, radio and internet sources are less concerned about the accuracy of news. They think the information from the media is becoming incorrect. Do you agree with this opinion or not and explain why 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Which one do you prefer? Why?1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days. 47
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Important
...ody can improve and amplify this trait. important part of our lives. People who has good ...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ld. To make a long story short, taking all of the aforementioned ideas into consideration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89616252822 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88019664539 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505643340858 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.359485588 48.9658058833 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.928571429 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6428571429 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879130876985 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382627429068 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236744436519 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495129530682 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247962418707 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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