Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Newspaper and magazines are the best way of to learn about the foreign country.
As some people may hold the view that newspaper and magazines are an informative broad casting which boost peoples' knowledge about the foreign country; however, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that there is a list of resources which have the priority toward the newspaper. I personally agree with the second idea. Among the countless reasons which advocate my belief, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones that persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The fist exquisite reason to be mentioned is the weakness of the newspaper and magazines in the coverage of the whole subjects. It is cogently obvious that each newspaper or magazine contain limited amount of the papers and this amount cannot be accountable to cover whole subjects; besides, the several different events daily occur in all around the world, which have more vital value and importance. In this case, these events will have the priority and a major portion of the papers are allocated to these subjects. Consequently, it will be arduous for a newspaper to cover whole data and information related to a foreign country.
The second reason, one should take into account this significant fact that nothing can be comparable with the living in that country to get informed about it. If an individual has the chance to live in a foreign country, he will get aware about different aspects of the living rules and values on that country in a very short duration. As a matter of fact, a training which incorporates with the experience and practical is more effective than the reading in the magazines or newspapers. For instance, one of my friends had an opportunity to live in London for three months; it is really unbelievable that he got informed about whole cultural and historical value of this country; moreover, he enhanced his English skill and now he speaks such as a native.
In the approaching this issue apart from the fact mentioned above, one should consider another sublet point meticulously that internet is more reliable and holistic source of information about this task. In fact, just by plugging into network and surf the internet for short period a huge amount of the data is accessible about the different subject. The information about the foreign country is not exceptional from this fact. For instance, by searching in Wikipedia different origins about history, economic, climate, and culture are available; or by using google earth it is possible to find the direction and feel the atmosphere or the environment by 3D visual effect that it used such as you are there.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and example lead us to the conclusion that newspaper and magazines are not an appropriate origin to get informed about the different country but that was the story in the nut shell. By and large I highly recommend to travel and visit that country or if you are not affordable for its cost use the internet as a comprehensive resource which covers every details about it.
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newspaper and magazines are an informative broad casting which boost peoples' knowledge about the foreign country;
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
each newspaper or magazine contain limited amount of the papers
each newspaper or magazine contains limited amount of the papers
he enhanced his English skill
he enhanced his English skills
In the approaching this issue apart from the fact mentioned above,
In approaching this issue apart from the fact mentioned above,
for short period
for a short period
by 3D visual effect that it used such as you are there.
by 3D visual effect that it used like you are there.
all aforementioned reasons and example lead us
all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us
By and large I highly recommend to travel and visit that country or if you are not affordable for its cost use the internet as a comprehensive resource which covers every details about it.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? Be sensitive to use pronouns.
Sentence: The fist exquisite reason to be mentioned is the weakness of the newspaper and magazines in the coverage of the whole subjects.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to fist and exquisite
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No. of Words: 506 350 //Don't use those pattern sentences. develop less sentences.
the ideal condition:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 506 350
No. of Characters: 2451 1500
No. of Different Words: 249 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.743 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.651 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 174 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 135 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.765 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.904 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
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