Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history teachers always are respected by society for their pivotal role in the prosperity of nations. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether these days they are appreciated and valued much more than before or not. Hence, when it comes to my stance, by weighing up the current circumstances in comparison to the previous era, I firmly hold the idea that the vital part of teachers gained recognition in every society thanks to their sacrifice and sincere efforts which caused today's instructors to be more honorable than they used to be for three reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the main reason why I hold this idea is that, as Nelson Mandela once said, "Education is the most powerful weapon to change the world", education has become more notable day by day. furthermore, teaching methods have changed a lot and converted more sophisticated, ergo, some people who want to be a teacher should be knowledgeable and educated while previously they were just able to teach reading and writing. Consequently, these days, teachers valued is more than ever.
By the same token, another paramount reason that must be
mentioned here is that ancient teachers were not as kind and fair as now. In the past, they lost their temper easily but today they take a joke and do not penalize students. Besides, they make a great commitment to students which provides teachers with mutual respect. As an illustration, my grandfather always says, his teacher regularly punished him physically and said he was not stupid which cause him to drop-out.
Last but not least, evidence has demonstrated that in today's situation teachers salary has a high rate among other occupations as a result of their work is worth a fortune. In contrast, in the past, parents did not believe teachers effects and preferred themselves to teach their children. owing to widespread ignorance about education which was epidemic among old-fashioned people, teachers effects were underestimated by them.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I definitely disagree with this initial statement and as liberal societies believe that teachers affect eternity and no one can tell where their influence stops. Ultimately I believe that the position of teachers has increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22811671088 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89583749611 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612732095491 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9699657276 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242585746111 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816467529692 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420222550704 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110377550293 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407000487251 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.