There is no denying that friendship and kinship contribute to people’s happiness. Friends occupies most of our life time such as playing or working together. Some people believe that maintaining a small group of friends over a long period of time for euphoria is more important than making new ones; however, others consider having new friends is more beneficial. In my opinion, I am in favor of sustaining old friends. The following will substantiate my views.
First of all, old friends are genuine ones. To be more specific, people who we spend a profusion of time to acquaint are more willing to give human beings in need a hand. For example, after I had car accidents, there are two of my friends who I know since kindergarten visiting me and companying me through that hard time. Whereas, my newly acquainted fellows even did not come to see me. It is more obvious that a long-term friendship is much more reliable, and the capability to maintaining such friends is more significant.
Secondly, old friends tend to show more understanding more of me. That is to say that since we have companying each other for a considerable time, we have already realized each other’s habits and hobbies. For instance, every birthday since I met those my old fellows, I always got the gifts that I had desired for a long time or every time we have a lunch they always skip those restaurant selling seafood which I am allergic to. On the contrary, compared to my old friends, those newly friends do not know much more about me, they could choose a shop that sells a provision food I cannot eat or breaking my rules and then make me angry.
Admittedly, the ability to make new friends are quite important since they can deal with some problems that my old fiend cannot solve. For example, after I graduated and devoted myself to the throat-cutting job market, I met challenging difficulties. Fortunately, my supervisor who is one of my new fellows teach me how to tackle them. Nonetheless, compared with the ability to maintain a long-term friendship, it still plays a less pivotal role for one’s happiness.
To sum up, due to above mentioned reasons, which can correlate with each other to generate a whole and become more convincing than any single one of them. We may comfortable to say that maintain friendships over a long period of time is more paramount for happiness since they can show more understanding and offer a help when we are in need. Plus, the ability to make new friends do not make us feel euphoria.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...happiness. Friends occupies most of our life time such as playing or working together. So...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ng a small group of friends over a long period of time for euphoria is more important than mak...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d companying me through that hard time. Whereas, my newly acquainted fellows even did n...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
...esired for a long time or every time we have a lunch they always skip those restaurant selli...
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Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y that maintain friendships over a long period of time is more paramount for happiness since t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78132118451 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80513536368 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512528473804 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.870410102 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9523809524 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2380952381 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319395797416 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962150300426 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874953240297 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20452318636 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753652200326 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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