Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of the society, there are more and more core family, and the number of extended family is decreasing overtime. For my perspective, extended family is no more important in the modern social environment.
For the first thing, the living condition today is better than the past and it's unnecessary to hold a big family to help with each other. There’s more advanced medicinal treatment, better education system and more convenient city transportation. By contrast, in the old days with low quality of living conditions, people in the family need to help with each other in the period of illness or educating children or other essential things. Taking my family as an example, my mother lived in an extended family and she was taught by my uncle, while I grow up with my parents and get compulsory education.
Furthermore, people nowadays are more likely to spend spare time alone because there are so many ways of entertainment to relax. For example, on the weekend, you can use your time to watch a movie, play video games or work in gym that don't need anyone's accompanyment. However, my father spent most of his childhood with his peers doing outdoor activities. It's obvious that modern people become more independent and extended family is not suitable for them to live in.
In addition, the relationship between people have tendency to increase complexity. Nowadays, when people want to build relationship with someone else, they will find there are too many aspects you have to concern about. But it's easily to conclude that relationship with others was simple and pure in few decades ago. Thus, extended family with so many people could be trouble to all the members in the family.
All in all, extended family is less important now than it was in the past based on above reasons.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, so, thus, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91530944625 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69743423851 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8949271059 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199083859854 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07017485634 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605720711128 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131587854211 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657954583673 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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