Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, each society needs its people, especially juveniles, to collaborate, even more than past, to figure out and solve various problems. In the last twenty years, communities have been facing enormous difficulties. To the best of my knowledge, youngsters nowadays spend adequate time to make progress in solving these problems. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, since ten years ago, social media has been developing at a tremendous rate, so the problems and difficulties of a community nowadays are known faster than the past. Most of the young people are more familiar with social media. As a consequence, juveniles have a vital influence on finding new and innovative solutions for the problems of their societies. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About three years ago, three of my friends and I decided to create an Instagram account to encourage our community to do philanthropist works. Our job was exploring our problems of society, and figuring out the ways that we can deal with them. After nine months of hard-working, five thousand people followed us, and most of these people participated in finding and handling the problems. Definitely, there are other young guys that spend enough time to deal with the enormous difficulties of our society, which we owe it all to social media.
Secondly, different schools encourage students to do some works to solve one of their society’s problems, and even it is mandatory in some schools. During this process, pupils learn how they can be a useful person in their community, and they know that people must collaborate to solve problems. For instance, my sister took a course when she was studying in high school, which she had to do a philanthropist project. She decided to teach the French language to poor people, who were not able to pay for class fees. This course had a fantastic influence on my sister, and she has learned that it is vital to prepare a peaceful atmosphere for poor people to educate.
Finally, concerning the whole reasons given above, I opine that juveniles nowadays collaborate with adults to solve their communities’ difficulties, even more than the past. The young people who have not any concern about the problems of their society do not deserve to be called human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03856041131 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86139846791 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542416452442 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3865868136 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.157894737 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17759521487 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529575715671 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414063032178 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108936901512 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524067561912 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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