Do you agree or disagree if people have the opportunity of getting a secure job they should get it right away rather than getting a satisfying job.
It is critically important for everyone to get involved in one job or the order due to the austerity of the country.I personally believe that it is much beneficial for people to grab a job with an immediate effect, rather than waiting for a self satisfaction job.I feel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, life is full of unplanned circumstances that might actually need an immediate intervention, so in a situation whereby one does not have a job, this might actually make us lose people that are closer to us or peradventure make our plights open to the public.My personal experience is a compelling example this.Four years ago, my mother was involved in a ghastly accident where are wo legs got paralyzed.So the surgeon needs to amputate her leg, because if is not done within the period of seventy two hours she might give up the ghost.Fortunately for me, i got a job with an auditing firm few months before the incidence.At first, i never felt elated because, i have never prayed to get a job as an auditor, but because i didn't get response from other like minded companies that i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the job.With this current job of mine i did not only take care of her hospital bills, but also ensure that none of the family members could alter any false statement towards her well being.For this reason, it is certainly clear to see why it is much important to grasp a job with an immediate effect.
Furthermore, taking a job immediately prevents us from living a miserable life, which is often seen with people that choose to wait for jobs that produce them with satisfaction.For instance,my cousin who graduated five years ago still remains unemployed.So many marketing companies have offered him a well paid job, but because he dreams has always been with an industrial company so he keeps turning down the offers.With this, he had encounter a lot difficulties such that he couldn't afford paying his rent, let alone taking care of the children school fees. My mum has been the bulwark for his family.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe accepting a job offer immediately comes with numerous benefits.This is because it prevents us from being embarrassed, and also prevents us from living an unfulfilled life.
- The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake The level of salt in the lake s water what scientists call its salinity has been increasing steadily for years because the lake s water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced by rainfal 80
- In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line The vessels were about 2 200 years old Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod The a 81
- The United Kingdom Sometime referred to as Britain has a long and rich history of human settlement Traces of buildings tools and art can be found from periods going back many thousands of years from the Stone Age through the Bronze Age the Iron Age the ti 3
- in the United States it had been common practice since the late 1960s not to suppress natural forest fires The let it burn policy assumed that forest fires would burn themselves out quickly without causing much damage However in the summer of 1988 forest 68
- The cane toad is a large 1 8 kg amphibian species native to Central and South America It was deliberately introduced to Australia in 1935 with the expectation that it would protect farmers crops by eating harmful insects Unfortunately the toad multiplied 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...der due to the austerity of the country.I personally believe that it is much bene...
^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an immediate effect, rather than waiting for a self satisfaction job.I feel this ...
^^
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...an waiting for a self satisfaction job.I feel this way for several reasons, whic...
^
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in my body paragraphs. ...
^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le that are closer to us or peradventure make our plights open to the public.My p...
^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...re make our plights open to the public.My personal experience is a compelling exa...
^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Four
...experience is a compelling example this.Four years ago, my mother was involved in a ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ccident where are wo legs got paralyzed.So the surgeon needs to amputate her leg, ...
^^
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: seventy-two
...use if is not done within the period of seventy two hours she might give up the ghost.Fort...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e within the period of seventy two hours she might give up the ghost.Fortunately ...
^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Fortunately
... two hours she might give up the ghost.Fortunately for me, i got a job with an auditing fi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t give up the ghost.Fortunately for me, i got a job with an auditing firm few mon...
^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...ng firm few months before the incidence.At first, i never felt elated because, i h...
^^
Line 3, column 739, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... get a job as an auditor, but because i didnt get response from other like minded com...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 796, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e from other like minded companies that i submitted my application to so i was ...
^
Line 3, column 822, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompanies that i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the ...
^^
Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nies that i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the job....
^^
Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...that i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the job.With...
^
Line 3, column 836, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...i submitted my application to so i was compelled to go with the job.With this ...
^^
Line 3, column 847, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my application to so i was compelled to go with the job.With this current job...
^^
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...so i was compelled to go with the job.With this current job of mine i did not only...
^^^^
Line 3, column 898, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h the job.With this current job of mine i did not only take care of her hospital ...
^
Line 3, column 1049, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... false statement towards her well being.For this reason, it is certainly clear to ...
^^^
Line 3, column 1090, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or this reason, it is certainly clear to see why it is much important to grasp a ...
^^
Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is often seen with people that choose to wait for jobs that produce them with sat...
^^
Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...obs that produce them with satisfaction.For instance,my cousin who graduated five y...
^^^
Line 6, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...duce them with satisfaction.For instance,my cousin who graduated five years ago sti...
^^^
Line 6, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...five years ago still remains unemployed.So many marketing companies have offered ...
^^
Line 6, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ars ago still remains unemployed.So many marketing companies have offered him a ...
^^
Line 6, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny marketing companies have offered him a well paid job, but because he dreams h...
^^
Line 6, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s always been with an industrial company so he keeps turning down the offers.With...
^^
Line 6, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...ny so he keeps turning down the offers.With this, he had encounter a lot difficulti...
^^^^
Line 6, column 482, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...counter a lot difficulties such that he couldnt afford paying his rent, let alone takin...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 497, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pay'.
Suggestion: to pay
...ifficulties such that he couldnt afford paying his rent, let alone taking care of the ...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pting a job offer immediately comes with numerous benefits.This is because it pre...
^^
Line 8, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...mediately comes with numerous benefits.This is because it prevents us from being em...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79404466501 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87138699539 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588089330025 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 20.1344086022 397% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 386.486015271 48.9658058833 789% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 386.4 100.406767564 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 80.6 20.6045352989 391% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.4 5.45110844103 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169099808016 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880729019474 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068129200919 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108949165096 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588205976412 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.4 11.7677419355 352% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.26 58.1214874552 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 10.1575268817 328% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.01818996416 136% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 10.0537634409 338% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 10.247311828 332% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.