It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and radically progressive era in which we live, all human being have always been in a great struggle to have the best program for their leisure and relaxation time. Whereas some people debate that reading a book or watching a movie can be the best choice for their relaxation time, on the other side of the continuum, stand others, believing that performing physical exercise is a better idea in comparison with the other mentioned option. As far as I am concerned, I categorically concur with the second mental attitude. In the ensuing essay, my perspective will be perspicuously substantiated by the underlying and conspicuous reasons.
To begin with, it is no secret to anyone that one of the most paramount points of doing physical exercise is that a person can connect to other individuals in outdoor places and he readily starts communicating with them in the future. This issue definitely improves the mental condition of a person because he is able to talk about different aspects of their life and empties himself from the daily pressures and tensions. Therefore, doing physical exercise is a great idea for our leisure time. An example can shed some light on this subject. Several years ago I made a huge decision and went to a national park adjacent to my house. This really helped me enhance my mental condition by discussing my problems in my new role in the Tesla Company with people who I had been familiar with them in that area. This issue created an opportunity for me to empty myself from the hard and deciduous situations in that company.
Having discussed the issue from the previous perspective, I would rather look at it from another standpoint. Besides providing an opportunity to communicate with other people, doing physical exercise leads to having a healthier life in adulthood as well. This phenomenon is really crucial and obvious for the majority of people are living in big cities because most of those cities are dramatically involved in air pollution. An example can drive this notion home. Consider a person who lives in Tehran, the capital city of Iran. This person actually lives in the most air-polluted city in Asia. If he wants to select reading a book or watching a movie in his relaxation time, he definitely will not be able to have a longer life.
In conclusion, taking into account the aforementioned reasons and examples, I am of the opinion that doing physical exercise is better and significant than reading a book or watching a movie for relaxing. This is because it creates an opportunity to be in contact with other people and also have a healthy life.
- TPO 36 3
- Imagine that you are planning to take a vacation, trying to decide between two places to visit. Which of these two options do you believe would give you better information about making your choice? Why?-- Reading about the places online--Discussing the pl 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's a waste of money for Government to fund space travel or space exploration. Give specific examples and details to support your answer. 70
- TOEFL T P O 31 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity -for example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88300220751 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78639492998 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503311258278 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6973531143 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.65 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192668129416 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571532640012 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697309813089 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139725346434 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491864721307 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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