do you agree or disagree with this statement? sometimes people think nowadays the media are less concern about the accuracy of news than in the past
In today’s world, media play an indispensable role in the society. This trend prompts a controversial issue of whether or not the accuracy of news is more reliable than what it used to be in the past. I adamantly subscribe to the idea that news is more precise than before.
First and foremost, media has become a competitive industry in the way that a fake news can have an irreversible impact on the broadcaster. As a matter of fact, since most of the people have constant access to the internet, if a particular news website or a newspaper publish a inaccurate news, people can easily surf the internet to realize the accuracy of it. Under such circumstance, followers of the website would not trust it anymore. On the other hand, the competitors of the website take advantage of this situation to publish a report which directly targets the website in order to attract more audience. Taken the latest news that I have found recently on a Farsnews as an example. The editor of the website published a report about gross domestic growth (GDP) of Iran economy in 2017 fiscal year. The publisher, however, turning a blind eye to the fact that people can readily find relevant data from various websites including Worldbank. The economic columnist of the website falsely propagated that GDP growth of Iran was under two percent but after visiting the Worldbank, I understood that growth of it in the given period is more than 6 percent. As a result of this inaccuracy, I would not follow this website anymore.
More importantly, there are various regulations have been introduced by governments which easily inhibit media from publishing false news. There are various sophisticated lawyers being available in the society in order to sue the principles of the media. Admittedly, this would not only is detrimental for the face of the media in the public but also imposes huge amount money on the shoulder of the source to compensate the targeted person.
In a nutshell, I hold the view that news broadcasting in different forms of media is more accurate than ever before since more obligations have been imposed on this industry and people can notice a evaluate the news.
- Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is positive or negative development? 84
- Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill 84
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in the past are more interested in improving their neighborhood (the area where they live) than now. 79
- Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is positive or negative development? 84
- do you agree or disagree with this statement? sometimes people think nowadays the media are less concern about the accuracy of news than in the past 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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...not trust it anymore. On the other hand, the competitors of the website take adva...
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...m various websites including Worldbank. The economic columnist of the website false...
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... would not follow this website anymore. More importantly, there are various regu...
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...urce to compensate the targeted person. In a nutshell, I hold the view that news...
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... on this industry and people can notice a evaluate the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87061994609 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.773355694 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1341044207 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9375 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190744527071 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641464741606 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465619703046 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131795228876 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034069284886 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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