do you agree or disagree with this statement
the extended family is now less important than it was in the past.
With developing societies toward industrialization, the relationships between families became colorless in a way that some family members do not see each other even for years. These changes lead to in this opinion that the extended family is less important than it was in the past. I personally agree with it. There are three main reason to show why I have this preference.
First and foremost, growing population have led to changing societies more and more so that people’s lives became so complicated, therefore they have less free time to be in relationship with relatives and spend time with them. For example, I am a married woman who lives far from my family, I work and study in university as well. There are only each weekend to spending time with my husband or going shopping and doing house chores; so, there would be no free time to visit my relatives.
Another prominent reason is that, nowadays, people prefer to make decision about their relations based on their preferences not familiarity. In other words, in the past, people were forced themselves to be in relationships with their families or relatives but these days if they do not like some body, they will not visit him/her any more. For example, I have an old grandmother who is always nagging about everything, hence, I have decided not to see her anymore because she often makes me sad. So, having extended family does not mean being in relation with all of them.
Last but not least, people these days would prefer to keep their privacy more than past. In the past, especially in the culture of my country, Iran, people used to ask their families and relatives to help them to solve their problems. For example for a newly married couple always families became aware of problems and tried to help them. These days but, no body does not like other people be curious about one’s life and does not let them to know about personal affairs. As an instance, I have an uncle who is always nosy about my life, it is about ten years that I have not seen him and I am happy to get rid of his curiosity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'somebody'?
Suggestion: somebody
...ives but these days if they do not like some body, they will not visit him/her any more. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 355, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...and tried to help them. These days but, no body does not like other people be curious a...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202409638554 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.175903614458 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0626506024096 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0746987951807 0.046263068375 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.089156626506 0.0685040099705 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118072289157 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0385542168675 0.0351676179071 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55518025289 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385542168675 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0650602409639 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00722891566265 0.0209618222197 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00963855421687 0.0139019557991 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2081.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 368.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65489130435 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.266304347826 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195652173913 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138586956522 0.174417080927 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0923913043478 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55518025289 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.7640564706 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8710072143 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0625 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 42.5652173913 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.05673758865 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223611863309 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906117305527 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.066513173024 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493353601701 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131857193655 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992542288707 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11604187567 0.0781384742642 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274169806941 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123087503968 0.067059652881 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180517132707 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138192957127 0.0618886996521 223% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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