Do you agree or disagree?
It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn money.
In today’s world getting a good job is not everyone’s cup of tea. People leave no stone unturned to attain a reputed and good job. Nowadays people have become so money minded that they just wish for a good income job rather than happiness.
It is a saying that Money can make the world go round. Everyone enrolls themselves into reputed schools, attains good education and go out for industrial training just for the sake of good earning. But they are not realising that money cannot bring all the happiness in their lives.
A best example to illustrate the above situation is of a rich business tycoon and a mediocre earning teacher. The business tycoon is doing well in his business. He is doing all sorts of overtime and working laborious day and night. From outside it can be seen that the person is happy since his hard work leads to good earning. But from inside he is totally become a robot. He is not enjoying his life and doing work for the sake of money. This can lead to medical conditions like depression, anxiety and heart problems.
On the other hand a simple teacher who is earning only that much that can fulfil his basic needs is happy in what he is doing. He goes to school and makes a good teacher student relationship. He finds interest in his subject and teach his students with full potential. No such medical conditions comes in his way of living. May be that job doesn’t pay him well but he is happy since he is enjoying that work.
At last I want to conclude that money and happiness never always go hand in hand. It depends on us to make our lives a product of both money and happiness. Therefore it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... for the sake of good earning. But they are not realising that money cannot bring all the happine...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...ing all the happiness in their lives. A best example to illustrate the above si...
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Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'conditions'' or 'condition's'?
Suggestion: conditions'; condition's
...ts with full potential. No such medical conditions comes in his way of living. May be that...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ditions comes in his way of living. May be that job doesn't pay him well but ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... a product of both money and happiness. Therefore it is more important to work at a job t...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...njoy than it is to earn a lot of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42946708464 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4446466826 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529780564263 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4754493125 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.2857142857 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47619047619 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249824790193 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077908713367 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142164652771 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146387301086 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134243251238 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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