Why do you think people go to school?
I think people go to school, not only for education purpose but for a combination of various other factors like societal awareness, interpersonal relationship, togetherness, co-curriculum activities etc. My views are based on personal and social basis.
Firstly, the foremost aim of every person is to establish his career in the best possible way. Enrolling in these schools enables a person to explore various career paths. Since all the students are studying under the same roof, they are able to express themselves in front of audience. People who are reluctant or introvert are able to open themselves in front of people. From my own example only I was a shy student. When I was six, I participated in a talent show but was afraid of expressing myself. But when I did my act I felt a bit light hearted by performing in front of a large audience. This incident completely removed my fear of stage. Under the guidance of proficient professors and mentors students are able to expand their knowledge. Whenever in need these professors are ready to help and improve them.
Secondly, from social point of view people get to know each other as they are meeting daily. This enables students to get the knowledge of societal awareness. Meeting people every day expands our knowledge in different fields. I illustrate this point from my own example, I was an engineering student where as my friends were from different educational background like medical, architecture, mass-media and accounting. My brother was going to take medical field but since I was an engineering student I didn’t know much about it, at this time my medical friend helped me a lot. Values like leadership, trust, honesty, togetherness, time management etc. are taught in these schools.
At last I conclude that going to school helps a child in the overall development. Success comes with using these factors in skilful way. Therefore I think people decide to go to school in order to establish themselves in this competitive world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02395209581 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90673387093 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559880239521 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6961711355 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146335602434 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415690790537 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733478477918 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127005470584 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090443404143 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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