There are times when lying is acceptable. Do you agree or disagree?
The views of the topic that there are times when lying is acceptable will always differ from person to person. The topic can be explained well by the real life situations. Lying is not dangerous until and unless someone is getting hurt from it.
When a child is born he or she is not at all introduced to the word lying. He says what he sees. But at the toddler stage he begins to get introduced to the word lying. There is no such evidence or theory that proves how we get introduced to lying. It comes from inside. Family plays an important role in shaping the mind of a child. Parents are the ones who introduces the difference between truths and lies to their children. A small example for this is that during Christmas parents generally lie to their kids that Santa will bring gifts for them. But we all know that the gifts are brought by parents only. But this small lie brings plentiful of happiness and joy in kids. They tend to believe in something that doesn’t exist.
An example that can best illustrate the above topic can be a patient’s situation in a hospital. When a patient is struggling with his life on a hospital bed, the doctor never tells the patient about his full condition. Doctors tends to lie to patient telling him that he will be fine within few days. This brings a positive feeling in the patient and he’ll be able to think about the future. Now telling the truth to the patient will exacerbate the situation. The feeling of hope will totally disappear. Here lying is saving someone’s life.
As a conclusion, I would say that the truth is a good thing, but sometimes it's not the best one. Being honest is not always the right decision to make because a lie, even a white lie, can sometimes bring better results than the truth would and in such situations lying would absolutely be acceptable. Applying these truths and lies to our lives enables us to compete this world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...he truth is a good thing, but sometimes its not the best one. Being honest is not a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56358381503 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46708594924 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9394916271 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7916666667 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 5.45110844103 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136455020951 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345321780459 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456395616972 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090756607275 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366725413478 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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