early bird or night owl?
Advance in technology and develop in life quality conduce people to be more wealthy and have a prosper life style. So, people should work and have a job on order to have such a life. There is a heated controversy as to whether one should get up early and use day time to be success or get up later in day and wake up until the late at night. As far as I am concern, I prefer to get up early and use the time for the reason of better efficiency and the issue of health care.
There is a Persian proverb which says: ‘Be early bird to become prosper.’ Getting up at early hours of a day gives the chance to have more time at working. Axiomatically, the amount of tasks someone does increase in this manner. In addition, morning is a chance for early birds to do their tasks till the night owls wake up and bustle the city. After 10 a.m. banks and government offices become overcrowded but before this time the amount of waiting time for people who their works tie to these offices decrease and they do their tasks more quickly. All of these matters are conducive to the increase in efficiency of a day and help to gain the long-term and short-term goals of people.
Another advantage of being early bird is that these people can be healthier than those that wake up at middle of a day. The biological clock of body determines the amount of hour someone needs and also the exact time of sleeping and awaking and this clock is sets with the sunset and sunrise. According to the researches, the proper sleep begins at the 10 p.m. and lasts for 6-8 hours till the sun rises. So, waking up at early of a day helps body to be prepared for a long work’s day. Furthermore, these people can have enough time to exercise, taking a shower, and then have a complete breakfast to acquire a massive energy to work without becoming exhausted. In this life style, not only is the mental fresh for work, but also physically you are healthy.
In conclusion, early birds have a more efficiency and healthier life-style than those who wake up later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...duce people to be more wealthy and have a prosper life style. So, people should work and ...
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...h a life. There is a heated controversy as to whether one should get up early and use day tim...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42970822281 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42614671851 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485411140584 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1853518217 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18901821602 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675904221022 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100962941127 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130950796692 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565306740592 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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