Education is a crucial thing in our life, Good education makes a perfect future job. Teachers are an essential part of the learning process. Whether Teachers now a days are less respected by students than in the past or not. This can be weighted in many aspects. In my perspective, I concur with the statement that teachers are more respected by their students in the past than today. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view on this topic.
First, and foremost, in the past the only thing that students rely on to understand a topic is by attending school. The teachers are suitable people who can teach and explain subjects to their students. Therefore, all students in that time period respected their teachers and obeyed their instructions in order to get a good score and improve their academic achievement. Now days there are many ways that enable students to learn and educate themselves. With the improvement of technology, computers and smart phone can be used to verify anything they don’t understand. This is an example from my real life experience, my son can use the internet on his computer or phone to go on Google to figure out any information. These materials would decrease the student requirement for their teachers to help with their learning process.
In addition, in the past people have more social communication than right now. Students may meet their teacher everywhere, and may engage in their private life. Respecting teachers is considered a traditional manner in society. Teacher should be respected like parents. For instance, my grandfather said he gets very excited when he sees his teacher in the street and says hi to them. But for my daughter if she meets her teacher outside of school, she doesn’t care, not really excited like my grandfather.
In conclusion, teachers are more respected in the past than these days. This is mainly due to the fact that, now days children depend on many other ways to help them understand something. They can use the internet to help them anytime of the day.
Education is a crucial thing in our life, Good education makes a perfect future job. Teachers are an essential part of the learning process. Whether Teachers now a days are less respected by students than in the past or not. This can be weighted in many aspects. In my perspective, I concur with the statement that teachers are more respected by their students in the past than today. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view on this topic.
First, and foremost, in the past the only thing that students rely on to understand a topic is by attending school. The teachers are suitable people who can teach and explain subjects to their students. Therefore, all students in that time period respected their teachers and obeyed their instructions in order to get a good score and improve their academic achievement. Now days there are many ways that enable students to learn and educate themselves. With the improvement of technology, computers and smart phone can be used to verify anything they don’t understand. This is an example from my real life experience, my son can use the internet on his computer or phone to go on Google to figure out any information. These materials would decrease the student requirement for their teachers to help with their learning process.
In addition, in the past people have more social communication than right now. Students may meet their teacher everywhere, and may engage in their private life. Respecting teachers is considered a traditional manner in society. Teacher should be respected like parents. For instance, my grandfather said he gets very excited when he sees his teacher in the street and says hi to them. But for my daughter if she meets her teacher outside of school, she doesn’t care, not really excited like my grandfather.
In conclusion, teachers are more respected in the past than these days. This is mainly due to the fact that, now days children depend on many other ways to help them understand something. They can use the internet to help them anytime of the day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... the learning process. Whether Teachers now a days are less respected by students than in ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... learning process. Whether Teachers now a days are less respected by students than in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xplain my point of view on this topic. First, and foremost, in the past the onl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot really excited like my grandfather. In conclusion, teachers are more respect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69118923602 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.331604424 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487504075803 0.236089414692 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149612415863 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119476215958 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321115260337 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214591217867 0.0645574589148 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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