Films can tell us a lot about in which they were made what have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
I support this idea that films can tell us a lot about where they made what have you learned about a country from watching its movies. I think that films are the best way of giving information about countries which we have not visited. I support this idea for three reasons including, showing sculptures and statues and streets, the face of people and color of skin, the brand of automobiles and cars, the lifestyle and method of living, behaviors, and characters of people who live in that country. History and culture of people, traditional foods and dresses ritual, religious, etc.
First of all, I believe that films can show history and culture and art in countries which are different and specific in countries, then we can know where and this film made.
Second, I have watched films to increase my knowledge and information about countries such as characters and manners, religious, art and architecture, technology and science. I have been always learning a lot of things from watching films something like
Third, on the one hand, films have been able to show a lot of historical events that happened in some places in the world which is useful for learning about the history of a country, however, these historical documents are not accepted by people who live in these countries.
In conclusion, some of the most important points come into my mind including
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- Films can tell us a lot about in which they were made what have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...oods and dresses ritual, religious, etc. First of all, I believe that films can s...
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...hings from watching films something like Third, on the one hand, films have been ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, third, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95278969957 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61688570126 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6262068885 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.25 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40787299251 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172195121582 0.076458572812 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188086457177 0.0737576698707 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187930689146 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122763991867 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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