In general people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
People tend to make their life beter and easier with every year. In present human's life becomes more comfortable than ever in history. Moreover, This phenomenon is influenced of different circumstances of our life. In my opinion these causes are that scientists develop our medicine and find heal for many diseases and our life becomes less stressful and easier. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, in present we also have many diseases but people create new technologies and theories that help us to destroy this problem. However, humanity progress every day and people understand that we should upgrade our health to live longer and better. For example,12 years ago I had problems with my stomach. I went to the doctor with my mother to heal this. The doctor only controlled my stomach with hand and gave me the same pills as everyone else. Two months ago I went to the doctor with the same disease and I gave 10 types of analyses to understand correctly the problem of my stomach. The doctor gave me 4 pills to destroy the disease ever. As a result, our medicine and doctor changed completely and helps people more with their health.
Secondly, in present people begin to love their live and eat only tasty and healthy food, wear comfortable clothes and buy things with good quality. The hole world and people is another. Furthermore, new technologies make for us the stressful and hard actions or helps us in life. For instance,10 years ago I wanted to find a job. The hole month I went every day without many food or good conditions to different companies to give them my CV. Now I have my notebook where I can send in 5 minutes my CV to 100 companies and in this case I save my forces for another actions. As a result, people develop the world so much that we live longer, easier and happily.
In conclusion I am of the opinion that people live longer because new improved medicine destroy the diseases and new technologies make the life easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65352112676 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50445189805 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481690140845 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9813506746 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184782617641 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573023769284 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055723278018 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119569085937 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189057232668 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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