Getting a job
Everybody passed for important moments along the life, one of these instants is when someone needs a job and looks for one on the internet, newspapers or talking with some contacts, but if him wants to apply for the job first needs an interview; this is so important because the interviewer will make the decision to hire him or not based on how it was the job interview.
In an interview exists some questions that people who hire you need to know like: Why do you want this job? What type of experience do you have? Which are your qualities? What do you think about teamwork? and, why should I hire you? The responses for these interrogations are so important because they could give you the job or not. Other significant things during an interview are that you need to be punctual, presentable, stay calm and secure; you shouldn’t arrive late or lie in your interview, nobody needs to appear being someone you are not. Maybe in the interview you will need a resume of your experience, capacities and qualities; on this, is important that you put the achieves and characteristics that others don’t have or don’t know, this will help you to have an advantage with other applicants.
The job market in Bolivia it’s growing, nevertheless, get a job now is easy because not too many people finish the college like in other countries. In my case, I am still studying at university, but when I Finish it, I will need a job, and I really want to work in something related to economics or finance in the country.
In conclusion, everyone needs to apply for a job, and it implies to have an interview to know if you are the right one for it; exists a lot of things that you should or shouldn’t do during this meeting to get the results that you want. Soon I will have to decide where to work, but first, I will have to go through one of these interviews, I think that with these advices I could do it so well.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-11-24 | wally | 76 | view |
| 2021-11-24 | wally | 76 | view |
| 2021-07-04 | talelaldabous | 60 | view |
| 2021-01-10 | talelaldabous | 66 | view |
| 2020-07-17 | maretu512000 | 60 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ties? What do you think about teamwork? and, why should I hire you? The responses f...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61689955201 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.360194741 48.9658058833 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185089334448 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751118296268 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102626668191 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155906857383 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966789108298 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.