has human harmed earth?
Due to advancement of technology, there is a drastic vicissitude in humans life. In the past, people lived their lives with trivial things. Today they want to live a luxurious life.As far as, I am concerned, latest technologies have made worth effects on earth than earlier. Let me explain my point of view.
There are numerous reasons for me to discuss.First we talk about a Pollution. Due to developed factories, more carbon dioxide is thrown out from a chimney of monsters. Ozone layer of an environment is abridged.We can see effects of a global warming on earth. Temperature of an earth is being increasing.For an epitome, when I was a toddler, I played on a bank of a river in my village. Water of a river was a clean, and I could take beautiful smell of flowers. Nowadays, that river is been polluted by local factories.Even I cannot pass through a bank of a river due to a odour from water. I conceive that this is not good for our kids.
Second, we discuss about a Deforestation.Nowadays more and more forests are being cutting for woods. Forests are asking help in desperation. Killing of carnivorous animal leads to increase in number of herbivorous.Animals are hunted for furs and teeth. Deforestation leads calamities like a hurricane. Roots of trees hold soil but because of cutting of trees, soil is been washed. Trees absorb CO2 from an environment and curtail temperature of an earth. How healthy we are if our lungs are a trespassed.
Last but not least, we exploit natural resources from an earth. Natural means limited. However, we content with materialistic life but not comprehend value of natural sources which god has rendered us. For quintessence, in holidays, we go Himalayan, where we can enjoy beauty of forest and see wild animals like lions and tigers, which is their natural habitat. In south India, we can enjoy beauty of sea water. How we can enjoy beauty scene of sea if we throw plastics in it and sometime by accidently oil is been poured. Sharks and whales are being killing due to swaling of a plastic.
From above discussed all drawbacks, I can safely draw conclusion that people are enjoying prosperity without considering harmful effects of technology.
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| 2019-07-02 | chaitali patel | 70 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85106382979 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0502942366 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4388926754 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1538461538 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.34615384615 5.45110844103 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11378357276 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252849430083 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426515090197 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607879068999 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284749588686 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.