how to spend money

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how to spend money

The money of government
Have you ever get decision how to spend money of government. Government has a duty to solve the problem of the country. And as you know country has a lot of different sections. like economical problem and educational problem. And now I am going to say the economical problem of a country. Also about the problem and the Idea of how we can solve.
If I were a president, I would like to have solved street problem. To be honest never did I seen a healthy street in Herat city. Especially the way which everyday I go to university. It is awful. Actually It was awful because I think about two days we can go university easily because of Taleban. In fact after they were coming in Herat almost some of street problems were solved by them. Like the street of Mahtab problem. Although the financial budget is weak. But they have done .anyway it is just about two or more than of streets what about others?
As a result I have solution for that. Imagine that I am president. At first I separate the money of every section, Then I get position for the people who expert in special major. Like for Engineer I get the project of street and the things which depends on environment and so on.
At the end, I am sure you would be able to see the changes of environment. And also by this way we will never the eyewitness of jobless teenagers in our country. And we will be development countries Inshallah.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, first, if, so, then, i think, in fact, you know, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42965779468 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55712962916 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0552496257 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.9545454545 100.406767564 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9545454545 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123377662527 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326963155763 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109988062251 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10267073471 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108722224459 0.0645574589148 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 11.7677419355 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.247311828 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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