how to spend money on a city project?
How can we spend a bunch of given money to help our in need parts of our society?
What would you do if you had a lot of money while you were said to spend it in order to help your country? There are numerous ways to use the money since the society which is going to be helped is poor and has no equipment. I strongly believe that addiction, street children, the education system and limitations for women are the most crucial and significant issues which need to be solved. But, as far as the money wouldn`t respond to all of the problems mentioned above, personally, I think I prefer donating the money for helping addicted people and stray kids.
Besides living in the same country, we are all aware of the difficulties made by addicted people. Consequently, If I had efficient amount of money to use for them, I would definitely build a tall and large building including hundreds of rooms for each patient. In this case, they would be alone with no ointment or something which causes them calm down. Moreover, a pool with cold water is essential as well. You may ask yourself why cool water? I have read an article before which said that freezing water helps them overcome their necessity for the medicine. Thus, I hope it will help them have their normal life again.
Another controvetional topic which is popular around the world for years about our county is the street children being abused and suffering hunger. In my point of view, we can also help them survive by making orphanages and educating them not to be thief. In addition, they would be able to be the heroes of their homeland one day since they were helped by their people.
As a conclusion, I will absolutely use the money for addicted peole and street children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun given seems to be countable; consider using: 'a bunch of givens', 'a bunch of gives'.
Suggestion: a bunch of givens; a bunch of gives
How can we spend a bunch of given money to help our in need parts of our ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help our in need parts of our society? What would you do if you had a lot of mo...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...r as the money wouldn't respond to all of the problems mentioned above, personally, I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elping addicted people and stray kids. Besides living in the same country, we a...
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Suggestion:
...elp them have their normal life again. Another controvetional topic which is po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59294871795 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48768952938 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4207571433 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5625 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115145581912 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391203366733 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609192068366 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09035221488 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796712638889 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.