Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?
•Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.
•Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader.
•Say nothing
In my country, teachers and classrooms have high degree and they are so respectful. Each person may make mistakes; therefore, some persons who teach new things to the humans may make mistake. Sometimes educators and leadership of group when they are speaking, they say something in incorrect ways. So, the listener or students have many ways to tell teachers or leaders about her/him error. In my opinion, it's important that their students must choose way that educators don't upset or the behavior of students don't show disrespect to the teachers. Hence, I prefer after finish class tell them about fault because of two reasons: first, its show respect of teachers and second is we have enough time to discuss about fault.
To begin with, educators as the same as each person say incorrect thing and the students can tell them about their mistakes after finish classes. Since, person who instructing to the pupils have many classes, it causes make them tired so that they say something in incorrect ways. Now, students who lesson to the teachers have duty to correct adductors' mistake. If pupils who understand error tell to the teacher after class, it would better influence in the teacher and she or he does not upset. Also, owing to announcing error after class, it shows respect to the teachers. In addition to, people who make mistake have sufficient time to think about their mistake and he or she can correct it for next classes.
Secondly, sometimes chief and educator says something in incorrect ways and it's not shows that they have week point. I believe that the best method to explain about these situation is speaking after class or meeting. Because of having suitable time, we can discus about error points. To shed light on the affirmation discussion, when I was master student, I took advance thermodynamic. In during semester, one days, thermodynamic professors' tough some point in incorrect ways. I understood immediately, but I did not interrupt their spoke. Hence, after finishing the class, I told to the professors and we had enough time to discuss about mistake and solve it.
All things considered, it is important that tell to the teachers or leaders about their mistake in correct way. All of these ways are done by young people who spend enough time for their society. As far as I am, the best method is discussing about educators' error is after class or speech. Because its shoe respect to the teachers and also, we have adequate time to convers about slip.
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- TOEFL TPO 34 - Integrated Writing Task 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 472, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...students must choose way that educators dont upset or the behavior of students dont ...
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Line 1, column 511, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... dont upset or the behavior of students dont show disrespect to the teachers. Hence,...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a lesson'.
Suggestion: who is a lesson
...ething in incorrect ways. Now, students who lesson to the teachers have duty to correct ad...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...e that the best method to explain about these situation is speaking after class or meeting. Bec...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one day', 'a day', or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: one day; a day; days
...ance thermodynamic. In during semester, one days, thermodynamic professors tough some po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90307328605 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48391929865 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460992907801 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1957108377 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1739130435 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157367689851 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540404861296 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368922626853 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111028477694 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146471173018 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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