It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city.
It is critically important for children to have a happy childhood, free of the hassles of a big city. I strongly believe that it is better for children to grow in the countryside than in large cities. I will explain in the following essay.
To start with, children in the countryside have more space where they can recreate their fantasies. There is nothing better than to run and play when you are a child, these two activities are possible if living in the countryside. In addition, the countryside provides a safe environment where children can play at their will. On the contrary, large cities have limited space, children stay confined to a house if lucky or to an apartment. The only contact they have with the countryside is through computer games.
Second, in the countryside, children build tighter bonds with siblings and friends. In the countryside, families and friends stick together, they do these because there is nobody else to lean-to, it is a way to survive. Children benefit from this hugely. They get to build closer relations with friends and siblings. I remember, when I was growing up in rural Colombia, we used to play every day after school in our backyards with my friends. Although sometimes we used to get into arguments, we still keep in touch through letters, but lately with facebook.
Last, in the countryside children are exposed to nature. Nothing better for a child than interacting with animals like horses, rabbits, etc, or to go out on a hiking trip. These activities in the countryside alleviate the stress of growing up. On contrast, living in large cities produces a huge amount of stress in the early developments of a child. Studies have proven that children that live in large cities and confined to a house or an apartment in large cities tend to be adults with phycological problems.
way of conclusion, I am in the opinion that children that are raised in the countryside are happier than those in growing in large cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, still, in addition, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8875739645 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73733080531 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0866664988 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430108367834 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12515873575 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131790170453 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274787914993 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135546199567 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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