It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Knowledge is a powerful asset that not only revolutionizes the mind but also the communities and people around us. There should never be a limit or a cap to how much knowledge one can attain. The more knowledge one gains, the better one becomes at being informed about the surroundings, making wise decisions and bringing a positive addition to the society.
First, having extensive knowledge in various academic areas gives us more chances to explore what our true inner calling is. When we take courses ranging from the sciences of the human body to the study of machines and computers, it gives us an overview, more like a trailer before a movie, to demonstrate what each subject consists of. For example, when I was in high school, I took subjects within the Science category along with Business related courses. This gave me a dive into what my personal interests and strengths were. After taking exams, I knew where my passion was and I was able to make a clear choice for my career ahead. Since, I noticed I was naturally good with numbers and Mathematics, this aided in choosing Engineering as my career path. I was only able to make an informed decision because I already had experienced what other academic subjects had offered to me.
Second, having more knowledge on a variety of subjects also makes you more informative which is a great commodity to have in today’s era. Nowadays, many courses are interconnected with each other due to the advancement in technology. For example, a programmer working in a health industry would need to have knowledge on different biological components in order to simulate a pre-appointment doctor’s checkup. Furthermore, biology and electronics have now intertwined to give birth to a new field called bioengineering, which adopts the knowledge of biology and integrates it in electronics to produce prosthetic arms, prosthetic legs and various medical equipment like CT Scanners and MRI Scanners etcetera.
Therefore, I believe having knowledge in many different subjects of academics could prove very helpful, as a student and as an aspiring career professional.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: To engineer
...and Mathematics, this aided in choosing Engineering as my career path. I was only able to m...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...herefore, I believe having knowledge in many different subjects of academics could prove very ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11494252874 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96921826435 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.487496089 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254647332154 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794327901802 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669959257114 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16694636751 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516726956043 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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