It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to seek advice from others.
Some people say that it's more effective to ask for advice and seek for counsels when they face problems in their life. However, in my opinion, it's better to take pains by oneself rather than wasting energy on elsewhere. This is because normally people don't care about what others are suffering from, and also because asking for advice often takes a lot of time and energy and results are trivial.
First, it's difficult for most of the people to understand and comprehend what others are thinking and feeling. And there is also a factor that some might not want to get involved in your problem. For example, I had a perplexed time in the fall semester of 2015 because I felt like that one of professors from my class was bullying me often. But because the bullying was so subtle and delicate, it took more than a month for me to realize it. After grasping the situation, I asked my friends about how they think about the professor. But because they didn't want to get involved in troublesome, they avoided direct advice toward the problem. As a result, there was no other way but to fight alone. And all things eventually ended up well. But during this period of time, I kind of lost faith in other's favor. Instead, I just found out that they act according to their needs.
Second, Asking advice takes a lot of time and energy, and the result is not very satisfactory. To be specific, deciding which person to ask and what question to inquire themselves are a full job to do. There is a research about letting chemistry majoring students solving the same task in different methods. A half of group formed a 3 project group and the rest of half stayed ungrouped. It turned out as a matter of fact that when teachers were not involved, there was no valid gap between the former and the later group on their academic grade and performance assessment. This show that students collaborating is not as effective as expected.
To sum up, there is no one in the world that actually understands other people's problem, and getting advice from those uninterested others often ends up wasting time and energy. In this regard, I think it's better to seek an answer to a certain problem by oneself, rather than asking this and that person about how and what to do for my problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...ewhere. This is because normally people dont care about what others are suffering fr...
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Suggestion: didn't
...k about the professor. But because they didnt want to get involved in troublesome, th...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...entually ended up well. But during this period of time, I kind of lost faith in others favor. ...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...emselves are a full job to do. There is a research about letting chemistry majoring studen...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...e world that actually understands other peoples problem, and getting advice from those ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5960591133 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42610212297 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519704433498 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.453943466 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148858392064 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399318034524 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459041309395 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104903231728 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567686015795 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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