It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be
built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use
specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The construction of a shopping mall in my hometown would have a profound effect on
the people who live here. If such a project were to be proposed, I would vehemently
oppose it. There are two reasons why I would do so, which I will explore in the
following essay.
To begin with, a shopping mall would cause many small local businesses to shut
down, which would have a negative effect on employment. It is true that a shopping
mall would employ a lot of people from the community, but the jobs lost at small local
retailers forced out of business would be greater in number. For example, when a
shopping mall opened in the small town where my parents live, it forced a local
hardware store out of business. Even though the hardware store found in the new mall
was three times as large as the family store, it only employed half as many people. Not
only that, but the small local store employed well-paid experts, while the shopping mall
mainly hires teenagers who earn minimum wage.
Secondly, shopping malls often result in urban sprawl, which is something that
would reduce the quality of life in my town. While local shops of the sort I talked about
above are usually located at the center of a city, shopping malls are usually found on
the outskirts of town. It is possible for customers to walk to local stores found
downtown, but it is necessary to drive to shopping malls. Not only that, but after a
shopping mall becomes successful, other business will open up nearby and patronizing
them will also require driving. I am of the opinion that the ability to walk to shops and
services is a part of a high quality of life. This means that a shopping mall will cause
life in my hometown to be much less enjoyable.
In conclusion, I would strongly oppose the construction of a shopping mall in my
hometown. This is because it would force small family-run businesses to shut down,
and because it would cause my life to be less pleasant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: greater
...tailers forced out of business would be greater in number. For example, when a shopping mall ope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43025823773 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4925416022 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.125 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960812922098 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424896906036 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024113973921 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0339730150324 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264225149204 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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