It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
Every people should have the opportunity to receive education. Location shouldn't be a restriction for student to go to school. So, I suppose with the plan that new high school will be built near in my community. It is a good news ever announced.
First of all, every children in my community should access to educational institute while they are living with their family. The children who interested in education don't need to commute to others town/city for education. It's good with both students and their parents. The new high school help parents save time and cost involving in educational purpose. Moreover, family members can stay together which increase family relationship to become closer. When I was young,for example, after came back from school, my mother prepared meals for family. After I finished doing my homework, it is the happiness moment that I could see every family members' face. If my school doesn't locate near my hometown, I shouldn't have time being with my family.
Secondly, building a new high school is a form of civil development which drive economy and create jobs. New school attracts people who find jobs and teachers to migrate to the town. So their salary received from the government help drive the local businesses such as restaurant and grocery shop to strive. Additionally, the infrastructure of the school, which is a great property, could be used for community activities. Local people who want to arrange sport event such as football game can be facilitated by school infrastructure, green field, for instance. This great development of new high school return its benefit to community unexpectedly which is the critical key to over social development.
To summarize, building a new high school is unbeatable decision. It not just help children access to good education, but also help develop community in various aspects which finally improves people discipline and perspective throughout civilization improvement.
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harm damaged by human activity Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live What is your opinion Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
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- Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 79
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: shouldn't
...ortunity to receive education. Location shouldnt be a restriction for student to go to s...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: , for
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24126984127 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85734743536 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1530081736 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.55 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167745086964 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056218036425 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569401070918 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113603165138 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427261718924 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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