It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I support the idea of being a theater in my neighborhood. I have been one of the intent advocates of art in all of my life since I remember. Every month I spent part of my revenues on this purpose and encouraged my friends to do this either. I have my own reasons for supporting building a theater in my neighborhood because in that case not only I enjoy my time but also can earn some money.
The first reason is that as I said, I enjoy spend my time in theater and always I try to be aware of the plays which go on screen for first time. It is one of my fantasy to by the first ticket for a play and if thr theater is in my neighborhood, I can be aware of the oncoming plays, so by its ticket as soon as possible.
My second reason is related to my personality. As I am a child, I have enjoyed to live in crowded place. It cuase me see that life is going on and still there are people who care about art and spend for it although exsistence a lot of troubles in modern life. It makes me feel better and has inspiring power to me.
The last reson is about my job. I have had a small supermarket under my home. Anyone with a little sense of economic can easily result that it is good for me. Theater means more crowed and more people need to eat and drink as watching theater, so it leads to buy me stuff more than usual. I hope this theater start its work as soon as possible and I can either enjoy and earn some more money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoyed living'.
Suggestion: enjoyed living
...my personality. As I am a child, I have enjoyed to live in crowded place. It cuase me see that ...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t makes me feel better and has inspiring power to me. The last reson is about ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.98958333333 4.8611393121 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29582692662 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.10205711 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113124600692 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465029802911 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625916299227 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070682990799 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508908770326 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.86 10.9000537634 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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