Working is an obligatory to provide a good life standart. The time we spent in a work place has a great importance for our mental and physical health. In my point of view, working five days a week with shorter hours is better and I will explain my reasons in this essay.
First of all, doing tasks in time is vital for business life since time is money. In order to complete the duties or documents or else accurately and quickly, we should be relaxed and calm. In other words we shold know that we have enough time to our job. If we work for five days it would be easier to eliminate the mistakes and risk, prevent the errors and finish the tasks in the right time.
Second, staying in a work environment for a long time may affect our health and psycology. Because, we are human beings and we need to clear our head and get rid of the stressful ideas. If we work for long hours during a day we would be in a rush and panic. Concequently, making mistakes and bad decisions would be inevitable. That will add more duties and responsibilities to our usual jobs. Worse, these mistakes can easily affect our toughts and self confidence. After these long and difficult working days it would be harder to get rest.
Third, adapting to work environment after four days is harder than adapting after two days. Because, staying home and rest is always sweater than working. Hence, at the first working day, we may not be working efficiently and it may have time to adapt. Therefore, time management could be harder. In case of working for five days with short hours provides better time management. Because, we would not be away from work for a long time and we could plan and schedule our tasks easily. Furthermore, the rest time or spare time of ours would be more valuable and we know the worth of it.
As a conclusion, we should work less hours but more days in order to work and rest efficiently and provide quality for our business life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
... it. As a conclusion, we should work less hours but more days in order to work and rest...
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... it. As a conclusion, we should work less hours but more days in order to work an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48732394366 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40396749362 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476056338028 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9860496646 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4090909091 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258922193085 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908509297987 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07572571783 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181346993178 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355522193703 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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