Is it more enjoyable to work only 3 days a week for short hours or to work 5 days a week for longer hours?
There are many different opinions about the hours and days of work per week . I believe that it is more convenient and attractive to work 3 days a week for short hours . Since the employee will have more time to rest and much less difficulties and work that will need to be done at home . Many working people will be right if they still choose a less busy work schedule.
First , because of the more convenient work schedule, people who work in business or other companies will be more attached to their company as the company gives them time to rest. For example, when a friend of mine worked for a company called People Talk , the employer allowed him to return to his old work schedule. Because of this, my friend was able to spend more time with his family and friends. This means that many companies at the moment do not allow their employees to rest more than work , because of this, the productivity and quality of work in the real estate market and the rest decreases. This means that you need to be more lenient towards employees.
The second thing that concerns the attractiveness of work, it means that employees will be more involved in the work as the company gives them a chance to rest. For example, my father worked for a long time as Deputy director of the Department of Education of the city of Moscow and because of this, he understood how much work is needed to prove himself as a highly qualified specialist and expert. But the head of the department of the federal service department gave more time to rest , but my father did not relax and tried to give everything according to maxim. Due to the lack of employers to give chances to rest only worsens the business. Because of this, employees will also leave the headquarters and stop being carried away by the intensity that their work has given them.
To sum up, I believe that employees need to choose a job that will be suitable for their own priorities. Since there will be no point in working except for money, if the person does not like it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, except for, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50136239782 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3850207429 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482288828338 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8847108341 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341025632646 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14215032822 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151665045365 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226943476778 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125919634123 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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