It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
I think friends and also, making friends are important parts of our lives from childhood to adulthood. We are all spending most of our times with friends that we have made in different ways. Some people believe that it is more important to keep our old friends while, others prefer to make new ones. In my view, keeping old friends is better that making new friends for two main reasons.
First, old friends know you much better than some one who comes to your life recently, and when they know you enough, they can help you better to make correct decisions in risky situations. For example, an old friend that comes from your childhood have seen how you grow up, what you like, what you afraid of or what ever that can affect on you decisions, so he/she can show you the best ways that fit you to solve your problems with less damage, or try something new that bright your life.
Second, you are more comfortable with some one that you spend a lot of your lifetime and also, you are sure that they are trustworthy. Old friends are the ones who you spend a lot of time with them so you feel better about them. For instance, you can tell your secrets that you can not share them with others without any doubt of divulge to them and calm your mind a little, or you can go and stay at her/his house to have fun together and make happy memories. It also, helps you release your stress and be more efficient at work or anything needs concentrate and open mind.
To wrap it up, old friends are important in all aspects of our life by affecting good and helpful in different ways. That's why we should keep them rather than make new ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35737704918 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07421041145 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4738632525 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389711599996 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190926771409 0.076458572812 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12990740149 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291654053866 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15608047063 0.0645574589148 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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